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Ms. Kamikaze S.

Ms Kamikaze is a rascal
through the door, she glides in
exquisite gifts as always
Accompanied by that devils pearly grin
Shes quite the social queen,
Ms kamikaze's been round with all the neighbours.
Hiding, plotting and contriving plans,
preparing the fruits of all her labours.

Ms Kamikaze knows right from wrong,
but avidly disobeys,
she's excited and of course well groomed,
for this evenings street swill soiree,
She gets what she wants dear Ms Kamikaze,
she's known in all the boroughs,
somewhat selfish yet loved by all,
so her vision's always narrow,

Ms Kamikaze S, my unforgotten listener,
she never has anything to say in return,
she knows my deepest darkest secrets,
and with that my heart she has earned,
Ms Kamikaze is mine now,
the dear girl, she cant escape,
but then again shes always been my feline friend,
the courageous Kamikaze Stickytape!
— Bosscombat, Apr 08, 2009

Critiques

yenti

yenti

17 years 2 months ago

Bosscat ???

They are a free spirit and a friend and of course other things, all of which you portrayed with ease and so well, thanks for the happy write, Yours Ian.T
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Bosscombat

17 years 2 months ago

Hey Ian!

Thanks mate! Glad you liked it.. I love my cat haha... Bosscombat
Seren

Seren

17 years 2 months ago

woot ashes kitten is a star !!! hahahaha

hahahaha i cant believe you wrote a poem about kama hehehehehehe i loved it i gave it five good read and it was definatly a bit of fun well done ;) Love ya Love and light JayC x x x x pmsl do i have to write a poem about her mother it wouldnt be fun shes a sour old cat these days hahahahahaha ???
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Bosscombat

17 years 2 months ago

you know it!

Haha I knew that you would know what it was about before you even read it. Kamikaze is still doin awesome...she got me a present today actually...a dead minor bird....she's a cold blooded killer haha lol a poem about ash would be funny! Haha glad the poem put a smile on ya dial. <3
Seren

Seren

17 years 2 months ago

Gotta love cats

we got a new kitten its bethany's the bloody thing isnt any bigger than your palm and its already tormenting the dogs its hell funny .... and ill have a think about a poem about ash lol though it will be tongue in cheek shes so grumpy all the time now shes getting old lmao .... love ya brother Love and light JayC x x x
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orgami

17 years 2 months ago

"Tweet"

our grey little Manx (tailess breed) is here the dark grey nose and silvery short coat nudging my arm for a pet or scratch behind the ears Caramel the French cat is snoozing somewhere not far I am reminded of a Ms Kitty a striped feline whom would come in from the outer world to bring our Little Baby Chloe birds also I would find her purring in the crib with Chloe happy the bird forever gone an offering from the Kitty to her adopted "baby" Chloe reminds me of our video of her and the cat playing until Ms Kitty started to bite Chloe's head both laying on the couch it was all in good fun and I stopped the match after awhile This is a great poem I love the many words you posess Soiree what a fine word that is and cats are cool Another great Poem Bosscombat!
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Bosscombat

17 years 2 months ago

thanks orgami!

Your cats sound awesome! Kool names too. Thanks a lot for spending the time to read my poem and leave a little of your story. Really appreciate it Cheers Bosscombat
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Bosscombat

17 years 2 months ago

haha johan

Glad this made ya smile then mate, I was a cat hater too untill I needed something that needed me unconditionally and kamikaze chose me haha Thanks mate Bosscombat

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