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Apr 10, 2009
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BUBBLE GUM FOR THE MIND
BUBBLE GUM FOR THE MIND
Silent nights and silent days.
Pale mornings.and blue afternoons.
Whispers of heart beats in your ear
Speaking of things you don’t want to hear.
I wish it were Halloween
What a marvelous assymmetry:
A magical moment of dark absurdity,
No ghosts that haunt your memory.
No spirits of that kind,
Just bubble gum for the mind.
— Geremia, Apr 10, 2009
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Nordic cloud
17 years 2 months ago
Oh super, just chewing gum super stuff
Geremia
17 years 2 months ago
Tragi-comedy
poewriter58
17 years 2 months ago
Longo
Geremia
17 years 2 months ago
Thank you, Chrys
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