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BUBBLE GUM FOR THE MIND

BUBBLE GUM FOR THE MIND

 

 Silent nights and silent days.

  Pale mornings.and blue afternoons.

 Whispers of heart beats in your ear

 Speaking of  things you don’t want to hear.

 I wish it were Halloween

 What a marvelous assymmetry:

 A magical moment of  dark absurdity,

 No ghosts that haunt your memory.

 No spirits of that kind,

Just bubble gum for the mind.

 

 
— Geremia, Apr 10, 2009

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Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

17 years 2 months ago

Oh super, just chewing gum super stuff

Now the clowns of bonny Italy have come out to dance, the masks of make-believe to prance. Italy has so many such masks, those of Venice we all know about, but there are many many more and with the Italian sense of humour, they are given both Chewing gum absurdity and pathos in drama. After all "Romeo and Juliet" was set in Verona and Shakespeare used the mask in like manner, with absurd comic and tragic results. An underlying sadness at having missed out on the fun lies in this too and that is a more disturbing element, we are glad you can laugh Longo. Tragi-comedy in the theatre of life. Annuccia
Geremia

Geremia

17 years 2 months ago

Tragi-comedy

J.B. Longo-Geremia ...that is the way of life. But at least we are alive to experience both, yes? :)
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poewriter58

17 years 2 months ago

Longo

I love the title of this poem and the poem is as smooth as silk Chrys "Go to live and get rewarded"

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