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Apr 12, 2009
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underneath
walked under the still breath of night
the frozen image of light playing pretty
in the atmosphere
an illusion
its just a light game of an event of a
horizon long changed and distant
save the birth of Novas
the angry glare of Super Novas
the distant and near comets
the dusty plume of Pleides shower
up beyond the little wires
our rooftops
our towers shackled to the
ground
dark as the Tower of Mercury
in the cat lined moon nights of
Pompei today
floating over all
the vision
of change
inextolorably slow
beyond wisdom
language
touch
we dance like them
hovering on our days
in our importance
and if there is a Heaven
from this land of peace
and hells
I want to shine a vision
like my face from
that wishing well
— orgami, Apr 12, 2009
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Seren
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Wow
Nordic cloud
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Oh Oh Oh!
themoonman
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Chills...
phoenixflame
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HIPPIE BROTHER! How goes it?
infinite_dwarf
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Language
orgami
17 years 2 months ago
the skin of colour
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wow.
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