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Drum Circle

Pomegranate seeds flowering in my grin
I let my wine glass sing
As my finger traces octaves
Slowly around its rim

I’ve cupped my palm around this conversation
And am whistling gently into and through it
I want it to resonate
Echoing trough the canyons of your vertebrae

I stand in the hallway of the veils
They are silver and mercury and spinning
Like drunken landscapes
Even as their shroud lifts
It covers what was visible

When I can’t see,
I feel you humming in my tongue and fingers and
I remember the taste of honey, the way
Bee’s understand what it is to die to defend something

Thinking now, honey will never taste the same
Just as my senses deceive me to step
Outside your dimensions, changing tastes
Make me unsure of each unrealized sensation

This is new…

Hesitation shape shifting into compulsion
Every devil/angel shoulder tango ends in agreement
I’ve fallen into the drum
The vibration is my skin and the wind
Blowing my hair is its timbre

You are the echo chamber
My follicles are bathed in your reverberation
As we are bound, skin to rhythm
Pulse to fingertip
Temple to pursed lips

I want to crawl into you like Salvation
Blinded by swirling veils
Ready to abandon hope and adamant
I have not yet done enough to deserve you.

— KambateSpike, Apr 13, 2009

Critiques

Lepadah

Lepadah

17 years 2 months ago

Re: Drum Circle

I honestly enjoyed this piece. Loved this "pomegranate seeds flowering in my grin." Great read. Peace lep
Morgana Tragic Proprietress

Morgana Tragic…

17 years 2 months ago

Yaaaaay Spike!

Completely love this piece Spike!!!!!!!! Just another awesome one from you! You always have something different to show us, it's so delightful! Like a different flavor of coffee everytime....sweeet! I'm with Lep, that line "pomegranate seeds flowering in my grin" is classic and memorable! You create such beautiful imagery, it's so vivid and beautiful. Always enjoy your poems! Peace N Love Katie Go Live & Get Rewarded- don't forget to join us tonight for the launching of the new Rewards Program! Join us in the chat room at 9 pm eastern (NY) to see what it's all about! Show the Neo love!
K

KambateSpike

17 years 2 months ago

Thanks ya'll

These comments were the first thing I read this morning and they've totally made my day! If only I could bottle this feeling and distribute it to people so it could be eaten with breakfast...

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