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mdehe
Apr 15, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Innovative Society

The Zeitgeist Movement should entice improvement
Open your eyes to realize a new implement
To stop the cries of world wide citizens
It's all tied to governmental lies and the Monetary system

Now you might ask - How do we begin?
Just sit back, relax, read, and listen
The facts are simple in that we start to fax technological creation manifestation
Get the worlds back with no need of manipulation

The masses will follow without dissimilation
Because this is allowed for every nation
No more will the chosen crowed control the general population
Aroused I strap the Monetary system with litigation


Spread the word, help stop the degradation
Help is easily heard with simple observations
Cure disease for ultimate Human relaxation
Materialistic lure is not what creates inspiration



                                             WWW . THEZEITGEISTMOVEMENT . COM
                                                      WWW . ZEITGEISTMOVIE . COM
                                                    WWW . THEVENUSPROJECT . COM

                                                                              LEARN



— mdehe, Apr 15, 2009
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Tonya

Tonya

17 years 1 month ago

Mattyd207

MUCH MUCH BETTER! Here you share your ideas in a well displayed array. This is much easier for your reader to take in and comprehend. You have some powerful thoughts in your writing and you are right. We are to complacent and allow to many wrongs to continue to happen, over and over again. Allow ourselves to be manipulated. I have to chuckle at the 1st line vs 3. Man is easily swayed and most would follow blindly along, as long as things sounded good and his ideas are at least appeased. Regardless to the facts, because many don’t take the time to sit back, relax, read, and listen to find the facts. (like you suggest) They are willing to follow if someone else is charismatic enough to get their attention. Sad, but I believe is true. Very good word usage, the flow is good, sounds meld really well together. Line 3 para 2 is a bit long…but if reading out loud, perhaps they all mesh well… Well done. Always Sincere, Tonya

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