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Apr 17, 2009
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TELL ME, PLEASE
TELL ME, PLEASE Some memories Too sorrowful to speak Simply Fade into scars As we seek To live another day With happier thoughts That Come our way Yet Who can forget A tender smile Or Eyes That slowly lose their Light A face grown pale With pain A body too frail To hold..What is this disease Called growing old What was your sin To suffer hell Tell Me Will someone Please.
— Geremia, Apr 17, 2009
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Nordic cloud
17 years 1 month ago
Oh Mamma, Mamma
Geremia
17 years 1 month ago
Mystery...
orgami
17 years 1 month ago
like the great wing drooping a bird still has eyes for the sky
Geremia
17 years 1 month ago
We dream indeed..
Kailashana
17 years 1 month ago
Who knows the why of things?
Geremia
17 years 1 month ago
Thank you, Anna
Kailashana
17 years 1 month ago
Isn’t it lovely how
Nordic cloud
16 years 2 months ago
Searching after something you miss
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