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cat's eye




tattooed on the nightan impressionist paintingtwo bright green searchlights
— leonard daranjo, Apr 19, 2009

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orgami

17 years 1 month ago

makes me think of a movie

Americana myth Apocalpyse Now where they take their buckets to get fruit from the jungle at dusk and they meet up with the Tiger The tiger was magnificent and very startling I enjoy that moment every time "Rule number one! Never get out of the boat!!" Tigers are beautiful we have a small orange one fifteen pounder scaled down but still has teeth and they all purr Love this rendition of mans second best freind to come to the cave fire!
Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

17 years 1 month ago

cat's eye

Leonard, The reflection of the cat's eyes in the night caught my attention in this one. The tattoo and painting are stationary, so I assume this is truly about about a painting? ______________________________________________________ Income-tax forms should be more realistic by allowing the taxpayer to list "Uncle Sam" as a dependent Anonymous
infinite_dwarf

infinite_dwarf

17 years 1 month ago

Leonard

Even though it's an irrational response, I'll sometimes get those little prickles on the back of my neck when Jai-ja does her "scary eyes". She'll be sitting in almost dark, and her eyes will glow. This is a cool little write. ~Jess K. ---------------------------------------------------- - "I wound her up, an' I shifted down, an' I offered this prayer to my Lord: Said, God, get me back home to Houston alive, an' I won't drive a truck anymore..." - Steve Earle

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