uh-oh

uh-oh (senryu)

Red-tailed Hawk, curious,
circles, watches from against
blue sky; Buster ducks

— barbsdad2003, Apr 24, 2009

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Country/Region: USA

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meic

17 years 1 month ago

Pungent and pithy - with a

Pungent and pithy - with a great [and so funny] ending. Mike "not all matterings of mind equal one violet" ~ e e cummings ~

themoonman

17 years 1 month ago

Chuck...

Yes, we indeed share a love for nature and its dangerous undertones... for how can one love the hawk and its prey... I can You can loved this picturesque painting with words... Richard

orgami

17 years 1 month ago

great dive

hawks are great~

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