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Complete Cycle

Outside the dawn begins,
the present and I are friends
but the future's too much to swallow,
yet, time teaches us just to follow;

as we make our collective ways...
to ever brighter days.

Stop, when you think aloud,
but dismiss yourself from the crowd.
There are no promises collecting on your shelf;
so there's no one to answer to, but yourself...

you'll be lucky to have a friend
still concerned about you, at day's end.

Once your "lot" is cast,
your next thought may be your last,
life grades on "the curve"...
maybe not what you deserve;

for we find solace in where we're right,
surviving the day has brought 'round the night. 
— docmaverick, Apr 25, 2009

About the Author

Region, Country: The High Desert, in the wild west, southern California, U.S. of A.., USA

Favorite Poets: Keates, Poe, Dickinson, and Dr. Seuss. There are a smattering of others, but why bother listing 'em all, ya know?, I also rely on a few of our poets, here....for advice, and what not. I couldn't possibly explain what a fountain of live, effective knowledge we have...right here in our midst ! To catch a glimmer of brilliance, merely visit: the Stream.

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poewriter58

17 years 1 month ago

Doc

Just my opinion to just follow is a bit smoother other than that you have given us food for thought . A very pensive write. Chrys Go live and be rewarded

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