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The Virus

It picks me upAnd slams downLike a rag dollIn the jaws of a dog
  It dances and singsIt racks my brainIt calls my name  It says:You caught me onceYou caught me twiceBut you won't catch me again  Adrift in my deliriumIn space and time  I whirl and whirlLike a dervishTurning to a tune played by God  The room spins about my headWhere am I?Where am I?Where am I?
— Michael Landau, Apr 27, 2009

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Flower

17 years 1 month ago

Liked the poem

Really liked your use of words below...very nice! I look forward to reading more of your work! I whirl and whirl Like a dervish Turning to a tune played by God Love and light...
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Darby Cain

17 years ago

nice

nice

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