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May 03, 2009
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GHOSTS-REVISED line was missing
GHOSTS Memories floatiing in cold midnight Hauntings in frenetic flight Visions unyielding and cruel Ghosts of my sins come rip my soul Fragments of heavens bliss lost Shards of hell Rememberings too painful to tell Empathy’s stain takes hold of me Things I’ve seen and don't want to see Anymore Places my mind has been Living vicariously through another's pain
Faded in the mix Broken now Was it all in vain Failed dreams are mine I own no love No return for who I was Too late to fix what has been done
— Geremia, May 03, 2009
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Nordic cloud
17 years 1 month ago
Oh bitter taste this life can be.
Geremia
17 years 1 month ago
Yes
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