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barbsdad2003
May 08, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Touché


Touché

"So what makes you red?"
I ask cardinal; he chirps right
back: "What makes you white?"
— barbsdad2003, May 08, 2009

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Tonya

Tonya

17 years 1 month ago

hahahaha, sassy

little critter! But an excellent reply. What makes us the way we are? Just lucky on both sides i suppose. Ya know, if we all would stop and think about it, we would see we all are just what we are. Very insightful with a touch of humor that made me think and smile Nice Barbsdad! Always, Tonya
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barbsdad2003

17 years 1 month ago

Don't really ...

know---and don't much care---what the neighbors think when I talk to the critters hereabouts. It's amazing the information the local animals're willin' to share with me. But sometimes they do talk back, esp. when they're busy at something and don't have time for conversation. Tried to talk to beaver the other morning; but, being suspicious, he just disappeared himself. Rejection's the risk I take, of course. But it's all worth it just the same. Thanx, Chuck
Tonya

Tonya

17 years 1 month ago

ah, yes! I know a man

that talks to Owls! i am wondering, Chuch, what is the racoon in your picture saying? he looks quite defensive. lol I just loved your comment, i think you must be very creative indeed! Tonya
infinite_dwarf

infinite_dwarf

17 years 1 month ago

Good point....

Score one for the Avea... ps. dude, that raccoon looks PISSED! ~Jess K. ---------------------------------------------------- - "Atheism is a non-prophet organization" - George Carlin -"Don't sweat the petty things and don't pet the sweaty things" - George Carlin

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