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May 10, 2009
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Love her Gaze through the Rear view Mirror
She made me hold my breathe and gasp,
I hoped this feeling would always last ,
She made me want to dance and sing,
More for which merryment brings.
I look for her features in strangers passing,
I ponder should I eat well or begin fasting,
Could I ache in heart to belly,
Will I stand firm, or wobble like jelly.
Can I seek affection anew,
Could I forget all about you,
May I move on from now to new.
Can I love another too.
May I be happy, never glum or sad,
Should I not worry saying good or bad,
Definitely I shall be ever elated
Dont overemphasize or be too creative.
Give some time to get over you,
Pray these feelings pass on through,
Let the ticking of a watch piece linger
Neither my affection grow dimmer.
Pluck up the courage, straigten up your back,
Get on with the here and now and be exact,
Pull up your socks and get back on the horse,
Dont get fat and over genrous with HP sauce.
Take up a new hobby join an Acamdemy,
Set your heart right on it be merry and free,
Foster the moment, and be light as a dove,
And the next mome the bliss of love.
Jump up for joy ring the bells,
Call out in a Football Stadium, reputation to hell,
Give up the routine, find spontainity thrice,
Justy live up the moment and roll on the dice.
I hoped this feeling would always last ,
She made me want to dance and sing,
More for which merryment brings.
I look for her features in strangers passing,
I ponder should I eat well or begin fasting,
Could I ache in heart to belly,
Will I stand firm, or wobble like jelly.
Can I seek affection anew,
Could I forget all about you,
May I move on from now to new.
Can I love another too.
May I be happy, never glum or sad,
Should I not worry saying good or bad,
Definitely I shall be ever elated
Dont overemphasize or be too creative.
Give some time to get over you,
Pray these feelings pass on through,
Let the ticking of a watch piece linger
Neither my affection grow dimmer.
Pluck up the courage, straigten up your back,
Get on with the here and now and be exact,
Pull up your socks and get back on the horse,
Dont get fat and over genrous with HP sauce.
Take up a new hobby join an Acamdemy,
Set your heart right on it be merry and free,
Foster the moment, and be light as a dove,
And the next mome the bliss of love.
Jump up for joy ring the bells,
Call out in a Football Stadium, reputation to hell,
Give up the routine, find spontainity thrice,
Justy live up the moment and roll on the dice.
— Mansel, May 10, 2009
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Kyarain
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