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barbsdad2003
May 13, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

oh, come on!



oh, come on!

squirrel grabs a bloom
to eat from pussy willow
tree; kitty objects
— barbsdad2003, May 13, 2009

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infinite_dwarf

infinite_dwarf

17 years 1 month ago

Kitty was probably horrified!

Poor kitty... you've got these short-n-sweet little gems down pat! ~Jess K. --------------- - "Until that 'morrow render unto me that which is mine; my stipend well deserved: Your sons, your daughters, your hopes and your dreams, the cruel consequence of your conceit" -Steve Earle

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