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mdehe
May 13, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Who Are You To Judge?



To spew my thoughts I vomit on the page
Spilling radical sonnets for any age
Human personalities built over every day
All bodies with similarities try and behave
Differences geographically always sustain
Lands with opposite legalities inside the brain
Even within close bodies holding in thoughts is maintained
So many sad stories with no human shame
As long as society deems individuals insane
But the insanity is within the environment creating the named





— mdehe, May 13, 2009
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anasta zia

17 years 1 month ago

who are you to judge

greetings, mattyd207 It was interesting reading a poem by a fellow Canadian! Albeit it seemed a burgeoning wave was about to bring down the dams. It's a cornucopia of hardly managed words. I think it's a good basis for a better poem - with some disciplined editing. i appreciated the aggressive tone of the piece - this gives a bolt of life. thanks for the poem anasta zia

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