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Shattered Light

light

above

rains pure white

of tears’ true love

in joy and sorrow

filters through a prism

of rainbows for tomorrow

twists the way of dark expression

toward man-kind en masse humanity

defined by stained-glass images shattered

cracked on cold marble floors calamity

lost in shadow and gloom belief tattered

gone in the absence of color and light

life sucked to oblivion day or night

spirits overcome cry help make it right

shattered light exiled and no longer found

sparkle in the eye thing long forgotten

yet compassion stirs hush make no sound

hurls into hell’s hole all things rotten

dignity turns pride inside out

calls truth into existence

walls fall down with a shout

of bright resistance

then awaken

by the word

spoken

Lord


— deelilah, May 13, 2009

About the Author

Region, Country: Northwest USA, USA

Favorite Poets: E.E. Cummings, Robert W. Service, Emily Dickenson

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Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

17 years ago

interesting format

I love the title. the poem read like one long thought. maybe written in stanzas or another of your preference will make it flow better. ~~~~~~~~~ Be whoever you are At all times, and Remember that Because of this, people will Always Respect, and Admire you ©2008Leonard Respectfully Yours, Barbara
deelilah

deelilah

17 years ago

Hello Barbara

The poem is centered, but the picture throws it out. I have tried this before with better results. I think I will try what you suggest. Thanks for your input. Yours, Deelilah
Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

17 years ago

I apprciate your kindness

~~~~~~~~~ Be whoever you are At all times, and Remember that Because of this, people will Always Respect, and Admire you ©2008Leonard Respectfully Yours, Barbara
Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

17 years ago

Shattered Light

I too, love the title but found the format hard to follow. Just my opinion~ ______________________________________________________ Income-tax forms should be more realistic by allowing the taxpayer to list "Uncle Sam" as a dependent Anonymous
deelilah

deelilah

17 years ago

Hi Janice,

How nice to see you. I haven't talked to you in about a million years. Yes, I agree with you and Barbara about the poem. I am working on it, but I may have to scrap it. I love thinking about how white includes all colors, how it is refracted like in a rainbow, and black holes which let no light escape ever--so I will work with it a little more. I do appreciate you stopping by, and look forward to seeing you again soon. Yours, Deelilah

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