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May 13, 2009
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Shattered Light
light
above
rains pure white
of tears’ true love
in joy and sorrow
filters through a prism
of rainbows for tomorrow
twists the way of dark expression
toward man-kind en masse humanity
defined by stained-glass images shattered
cracked on cold marble floors calamity
lost in shadow and gloom belief tattered
gone in the absence of color and light
life sucked to oblivion day or night
spirits overcome cry help make it right
shattered light exiled and no longer found
sparkle in the eye thing long forgotten
yet compassion stirs hush make no sound
hurls into hell’s hole all things rotten
dignity turns pride inside out
calls truth into existence
walls fall down with a shout
of bright resistance
then awaken
by the word
spoken
Lord
— deelilah, May 13, 2009
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Barbara Writes
17 years ago
interesting format
deelilah
17 years ago
Hello Barbara
Barbara Writes
17 years ago
I apprciate your kindness
Janice Pearce
17 years ago
Shattered Light
deelilah
17 years ago
Hi Janice,
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