Dark Road~an acrostic

Don't know where my original comment went, but I really enjoyed this write. ---------------------- "Until that ‘morrow render unto me That which is mine my stipend well deserved The fairest flower of your progeny Your sons, your daughters your hopes and your dreams The cruel consequence of your conceit" - Steve Earle

Ooops doubled up fixing typos see below

Ooops TRIPLED up fixing typos see below! (tried to changed them before the transfer of info in the computer) Tired & not being patient sorry.

Wooooh, this is a killer.... why is this not in the SPOTLIGHT!!!! I feel it should be, I feel it is really really well done. Ah Katie, it slayed me... I feel enslved by it, having read it, it has left a brand on me, very powerful, very clever & very skillfully crafted my friend (Oh you know almost all my favorite songwriters come from Canada, there is definitely something about that place that breeds good writers!!!) More, more, more & bravo girl! xx~ Anni ~~~ "A loving person lives in a loving world. A hostile person lives in a hostile world; everyone you meet is your mirror." ~Ken Keyes, Jr.

The writing is pretty good except theone line you missed out a word. Killing me slowly, every slash for ripping the. What do you mean your innerslef. I think I would've written "Killing me slowly, every slash for ripping the heart." You write whatever you want I think what I've said would've been better. This poem is very promising and I hope to read some more of your works. Sincerely, Mary Steffen

Yay for acrostics - you did an excellent job on your acrostic, Katie. Maybe I'll write a new one to post. (That is if I can get motivated enough).

five stars of course to you my Canadian freind just found it here today its amazing

A very well done accrostic with awesome imagery and smooth flow. A very difficult feat to accomplish in accrostics and you have done it exceptionally well. mike

Your muse is certainly having fun with the darkness! And sucking us all in with you!! Great acrostic. I would tread lightly going to this Dark Road. Live, Laugh and Love (and don't forget to write) Tink