Olive Twig

K, you wanted my in depth feel of this one. Such...contradictions in gentleness and bitterness between verses. I'm not gonna sit here and tell you how great and stunning it is. You obviously already know that. Other wise I don't know what to say. I've taken something from this, yes. It brought back some flashbacks I wish I never had, especially your verses in italics. I can honestly say I've written similar lines myself in my own attempts to say he will never rule me or hurt me again, some sort of ridiculous self assurance you can never completely assure yourself of. Anyways, Shadow, thanks for sharing this piece. Peace N Love Katie

There is a longing and wistfulness in this poem of giving with one hand and taking away in another .. Sadness is there too but a brillant write well done Best wishes JayC

I think it speaks for itself. An entreaty that says despite all, everything is fine as it is. An offering of a truce and peace. Really a lovely write. I like the repetition/rhyme you use and the change in script. (The italicized verse, almost feels, as if you are convincing yourself. The way they switch from the offering, to the response.) Just a thought…. It could be two differnt poems layered together. Interesting construction here! Loved it! Always, Tonya

This is a very emotive poem. The juxtaposition between the narrator and the speaker is well done. Bygones to the last discussion. This effort deserves a congratulation. Regards, bjp