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sumsum22
May 22, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Silly little Asian-style poems - Set one

smiley faced hot dog
stares back at me from my plate
I should eat more greens.

portable camel
has no use in the U.S.
maybe in egypt.

concave cloaca
cloacal image, James Joyce
you guys seen my toes?

I write bad haiku
but I really don't care much
because you love me.

Oh how I love toes
how they bounce and how they sing
frolicking freely.
— sumsum22, May 22, 2009
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infinite_dwarf

infinite_dwarf

17 years ago

Where'd it go??

It didn't post. ------------------------------------- "Until that ‘morrow render unto me That which is mine my stipend well deserved The fairest flower of your progeny Your sons, your daughters your hopes and your dreams The cruel consequence of your conceit" - Steve Earle
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soratenshi04

17 years ago

invisible....

did you write this with invisible ink? I don't see anything :( Hope you fix it soon. :)
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sumsum22

17 years ago

sorry guys

hey everyone, I don't know why the poems weren't on there. I've fixed it now. enjoy. :) Bryan/Cliff/Chitty/Sanchez/Icy/Zigzag Toes. I have them.
infinite_dwarf

infinite_dwarf

17 years ago

Aliases or personalities??

LMFAO!!! This was an amusing write - I wanna see singing toes. :~D ---------------------------------------------- "Until that ‘morrow render unto me That which is mine my stipend well deserved The fairest flower of your progeny Your sons, your daughters your hopes and your dreams The cruel consequence of your conceit" - Steve Earle
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ginnydragon54

17 years ago

:-D

LOL you're so weird, but you're still awesome!

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