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May 24, 2009
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Dreamwalker Pt. II: Rivulets of Time
Dark rivulets of time rush past
In shadow from an overcast
Uncover what it means to me
Exposing all that comes to be.
To stay along the path confined
And fighting raging time refined
Above the crumbling sandbar lee
Exposing all that comes to be.
Precarious and ominous
My guiding spirits raise a fuss
We tread along to pay the fee
Exposing all that comes to be.
Dark rivulets of time rush past
Exposing all that comes to be
In shadow from an overcast
Uncover what it means to me
Exposing all that comes to be.
To stay along the path confined
And fighting raging time refined
Above the crumbling sandbar lee
Exposing all that comes to be.
Precarious and ominous
My guiding spirits raise a fuss
We tread along to pay the fee
Exposing all that comes to be.
Dark rivulets of time rush past
Exposing all that comes to be
— mwrigas, May 24, 2009
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Morgana Tragic…
17 years ago
Yaaaay mikey!!!!
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