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May 25, 2009
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Your Performance
To the sound of applause
You enter the well lit stage
As you take a deep breath
The crowd screams your name
As your words pour themselves
Into the hearts of so many
Tears fall from your eyes
For the excitement is painted
On the faces of the multitudes
As your performance slowly ends
So many ask you to continue
Time becomes less significant
As your words become vaccines
To the demons of a raging pain
Like the sound of Apollo’s Lyre
You leave your listeners in awe
Their hearts become a canvas
Which you fill with masterpieces
All you did was listen to your heart
You enter the well lit stage
As you take a deep breath
The crowd screams your name
As your words pour themselves
Into the hearts of so many
Tears fall from your eyes
For the excitement is painted
On the faces of the multitudes
As your performance slowly ends
So many ask you to continue
Time becomes less significant
As your words become vaccines
To the demons of a raging pain
Like the sound of Apollo’s Lyre
You leave your listeners in awe
Their hearts become a canvas
Which you fill with masterpieces
All you did was listen to your heart
— paul, May 25, 2009
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Critiques
Geezer
17 years ago
So glad....
Tonya
17 years ago
grrrrrrrrrrrrrr... where the heck did my comment go???
Rett
17 years ago
Paul
Janice Pearce
17 years ago
Your Performance
Morgana Tragic…
17 years ago
Yaaaaaaaaaay paul
infinite_dwarf
17 years ago
Yayyyyyy, Zeus!
orgami
17 years ago
well composed young man and spoken A Poets voice
Tink
17 years ago
This is a good one paul
Ink Dragon
17 years ago
Paul,
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