Nordic cloud

May 27, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Two short poems

In a drought

the trees make the sound

of water

In the silence of the wood

the adder

crosses the path

— Nordic cloud, May 27, 2009

About the Author

Region, Country: Oslo and Flatdal, Norway., NOR

Favorite Poets: Too daunting this.

Critiques

orgami

17 years ago

me likey

great poem ann of course I would understand this marvelous peice You are great!!

Geezer

17 years ago

Just kidding,I got the picture right away. These lines convey some of things that I am sure you meant,and all of the things that I could conjure up! Great Job! I am only now begining to realize the things that I have missed before joining neopoet. You and all the rest of the people here have shown me so much! Thanks Ann, O'Queen of Poetic Norway! Gee.

Ink Dragon

17 years ago

YAY Ann,

master of the Japanese art of writing! I love these "short poems", especially how they complement each other. You have conjured up a vivid picture in my imagination. Admirable! Yours, ~Nina

Nordic cloud

17 years ago

AW! Nina thank you

Coming from one who studies the art of poetry this is a welcome response, thank you dear Nina but I do not call myself a master. After all the Sushi students are not masters until they have studied the 'art' for seven years, is it!!!!!!! I have more of these and each time we are out in the woods more seem to come, falling out of the air as one sees or hears something that prompts the mind to muse and create new combinations of thoughts, one could say living metaphors, as they strike a note in the brain just then and there at that moment and are complete. Ever your friend Ann of Norway

Cloudthings

17 years ago

This is such a lovely, lovely gentle write dear Ann, mmm I want

This is such a lovely, lovely gentle write dear Ann, mmm I want to read this over & over. Love to you xxx~ Anni ~~~ "Love has nothing to do with what you are expecting to get, it's what you are expected to give -- which is everything." -Anon

anasta zia

17 years ago

Hello Ann,

Economy of words but not of image. Very nice. adios, anasta zia

bjp

17 years ago

Dear Ann,

I was on the shore today, throwing rocks, building a breakwater. Nothing skipped. Of the rocks. Are you in your woods today? These poems seem like little teases and still big, like the breakwater meant to be. Brian

Wafi

17 years ago

Two Short, But Great Poems...

Two short, but great poems Ann.... I can see the adder passing your path.(so beautiful) And the trees are tantalising me. Great imagery... Sincerely Wafi

Nordic cloud

17 years ago

Thank you Wafi. You can

Thank you Wafi. You can perhaps hear them too?

Wafi

17 years ago

Yes Dear Ann

Yes dear Ann, I can. It is the magic of your words... Enjoyed both the sounds and images. Sincerely, Wafi

faerybeki

17 years ago

So much in seemingly so

So much in seemingly so little, gloriously effective little (yet HUGE) poems Ann, really loved them both, much love b x

barbsdad2003

17 years ago

Words ...

by which to meditate. Very nice. Soothing. So wonderful it is that so few words (can) convey so much. When often the reverse is so: that a piece of many words conveys but little. Thanx, Chuck

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