All the grief, loss and trauma that's gone down this year, a senryu

bloody bloody crap
bloody bloody bloody shit
bloody well fuck off.

— weirdelf, May 29, 2009

About the Author

Region, Country: Sydney, Australia, AUS

Favorite Poets: The Romantics, The Mersey Sound, The Beats and, of course, The Bard

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Critiques

Morgana Tragic…

17 years ago

Nice one Jess...

There you go, my friend, let it all out!!!!!!!! Sometimes the many things we bottle up can be said in fewest words...this says everything. I sure hope you feel better, and that the year ahead goes MUCH MUCH better than the last. *Lots of hugs* Peace, love, n hugs Katie

Darby Cain

17 years ago

AGREED

Darby Cain

Seren

17 years ago

Let it out Jess … I agree

Let it out Jess ... I agree Bloody bloody crap right enough lets hope it gets better :) Much love Jayne x x Hugz x x

weirdelf

16 years 12 months ago

It's got a whole lot better,

thanks to support from my Neopoets friends, family and those bloody communists we call the Australian Government. cheers, Jess Forever unwrapping the eternal present.

Candlewitch

16 years 12 months ago

=(

I couldn't agree more. I do know about having a lousy year, and it is only half over! I hope you feel better very soon. Always, Cat

Jillian Botha

16 years 11 months ago

I could not have said it better.....

Take a deep breath Jess! And i wholeheartedly agree with every single word! Much love in script Jill Mistakes happen, do not dwell on them, live them, mourn them and move on to better things. (PS: if that does not work eat lots and lots of chocolate)

Seren

16 years 5 months ago

Oh dear Jess …. I missed

Oh dear Jess .... I missed this one but I cannot wait for this filthy yr to be over its been the worst and here you Senryu well done Love and hugs Jayne x x

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