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Michael Landau
May 31, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Some things you can't take too seriously

 It started out as something funAnd then it became politicalAnd then it became criticalAnd then it became personal  SuddenlyIt's not that much fun anymoreIt used to be a way to pass timeA way to share thoughtsA way to make friends  NowIt's all aboutEgosAnd blusterAnd sour grapesAnd who said what about whom  It's so sad when friendships die
— Michael Landau, May 31, 2009
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Morgana Tragic Proprietress

Morgana Tragic…

17 years ago

Hey Micheal

A very raw, honest write. Sometimes the hardest things are said in the simplest words. This is a good example. Your last line really hits hard.."It's so sad when friendships die". That's a hard thing to take, dying friendships. Siometimes it's just meant to be and we move on and find people who are better for us. Good poem, Micheal Peace n Love Katie

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