You Cannot Say It

You cannot say it
Or you don't want to say
But your eyes say it all
What your heart wants to say...

— Wafi, Jun 01, 2009

Critiques

17 years ago

Thanks A Lot Julie

Thanks a lot Julie, for taking the time to read and comment. So happy you liked it. Sincerely, Wafi "Culture, location and beliefs; All vanish with love!" ~Afzal Shauq~

Wafi

17 years ago

Thanks A Lot Janice

Thanks a lot Janice, for reading and commenting. I appreciate it a lot. Sincerely, Wafi "Culture, location and beliefs; All vanish with love!" ~Afzal Shauq~

Nilmini

16 years 11 months ago

This poem of yours, the 1st that I’ve read after a while, is a mega blast!! Wow, you've used minimal words to express the maximum. Definitely, you’ve fallen head-over- heels for her & its clearly visible here. This reminds me of my own experience, too. Thanks for the read. You make me want to start writing again. - Nilmini

Wafi

16 years 11 months ago

Oh Thanks Nilmini...

Oh thanks a lot Nilmini, for such a beautiful comment. I've got some warm and sweet memories related this poem. So glad to see you are back. And yeah don't stop writting please. Waiting unpatiently to read your new work. Sincerely, Wafi "Culture, location and beliefs; All vanish with love!" ~Afzal Shauq~

lyz

16 years 9 months ago

Dear Wafi

My eyes and heart want to say, bloody great.I am enjoying reading your short but prolific work. Great. To the point and from the heart. Love it, Lyz. XX

Wafi

16 years 8 months ago

Thanks A Lot Lyz

Thanks a lot Lyz, my dear friend. So glad you read and commented on it. I greatly appreciate your thoughts. M encouraged. Sorry for the belated reply, was too busy. Sincerely, Wafi "Culture, location and beliefs; All vanish with love!" ~Afzal Shauq~

loved

16 years 1 month ago

just lovely

''You cannot say it Or you don’t want to say But your eyes say it all What your heart wants to say…'' ur beloved's reply must have been ''Iwant to say what you want to hear yet i can't say it but as you know why then you want me to say it?

Wafi

16 years ago

Oh A Beautiful Reply

Oh a beautiful reply, dear loved. Yeah she did say that to me ;) Sincerely, Wafi "Culture, location and beliefs; All vanish with love!" ~Afzal Shauq~

Seren

16 years ago

Dear Wafi

each minute I am reminded that lifes precious hold is tenuous ... I've wasted moments of longing ... in which I used to dare to dream ... and now, I dream and do it without fear lovely poem dear man sorry I missed it first time round beautifully poignant piece my friend ... another sigh (hugs) love Jayne-Chloe x x x ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")

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