Intrinsic

Depths of souls elude
powers of mindset intrude
Direction of visions enchant
clarity, substance recant
Multiple facets existing
collective perceptions enlisting
Appeasing the masses through rose-colored glasses
is this an ideal worth resisting?

— poet1, Jun 04, 2009

Critiques

Cloudthings

17 years ago

Welcome to Neopoet & well done, brilliant first post!~

Heh, I love this, wonderful cascade of verbiage... Welcome to Neopoet & well done, brilliant first post!~ Cheers Anni ~~~ "The moment one gives close attention to anything, even a blade of grass, it becomes a mysterious, awesome, indescribably magnificent world in itself" Henry Miller

weirdelf

17 years ago

the best of poetry, highly

the best of poetry, highly compressed meaning and lyrical to read cheers, Jess Forever unwrapping the eternal present.

orgami

17 years ago

beyond gracious eloquence bold

excellent work my day is finishing up here last few poems before dreamland and up early seven ITs now one a.m. crisp vocabulary !!!!!!!!!!!

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