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Jun 05, 2009
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A Stallion's Song
A Stallion’s Song
Wet, I paw the filmy shadows
of the sac I was born in
It breaks and the sun
shatters my safety,
then warms me
with old memories.
My mother bends
to smell my head and mane
I hear the sound of wind
in her whisper
and struggle to stand
for the sake of the promise
in her eyes.
Tender and powerful
she shows me who I will be
And now I gallop
Brilliantly I take on
this summer’s day
Whatever I see I become:
these fields of flowers
this fragrant grass
this earth, this sun
this boundless sky
Destiny I've none
but to gallop the wind
in the bliss of it
in all this joy
of wind and sun and self
— Celadon, Jun 05, 2009
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Celadon
16 years 12 months ago
CeladonHi Blanca, thank you
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