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the while I sleep




the
while
I
sleep


now midnight, winds hush;
a lone fox's bark finds me
from the woods; I sleep
— barbsdad2003, Jun 05, 2009

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Candlewitch

Candlewitch

17 years ago

:)

... and I awaken to feast on this tiny tidbit of a poem... very tasty indeed! Always, Cat
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barbsdad2003

17 years ago

Thanx, guys ...

every one. Every, every one. That means all of you. You know, every one. With affection, Chuck
Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

17 years ago

short and peaceful

like the simplicity, sleeping with nature nice images. ~~~~~~~~~ Be whoever you are At all times, and Remember that Because of this, people will Always Respect, and Admire you ©2008Leonard Respectfully Yours, Barbara

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