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Jun 06, 2009
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this is really hard to mean
yes--
if it be granted.
if so, it will move
titanium back to ten
tender chicks before these were
necessary: rugers, automatic pistols,
and the "Jap Bomb", sending
so many into circuses and
ovulating sand enamel.
gagging on death.
if i can forgive you once,
pilot,
for the jerk of your clothed
(not forever)
trigger finger,
tearing to shreds the Iraqi child
maybe 4 months into
understanding a plant,
i will.
if He grants it, i will.
if it be granted.
if so, it will move
titanium back to ten
tender chicks before these were
necessary: rugers, automatic pistols,
and the "Jap Bomb", sending
so many into circuses and
ovulating sand enamel.
gagging on death.
if i can forgive you once,
pilot,
for the jerk of your clothed
(not forever)
trigger finger,
tearing to shreds the Iraqi child
maybe 4 months into
understanding a plant,
i will.
if He grants it, i will.
— Quillsvein1, Jun 06, 2009
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infinite_dwarf
17 years ago
John
Quillsvein1
17 years ago
Thank you Jess
barbsdad2003
17 years ago
I think ...
Candlewitch
16 years 11 months ago
OMG
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