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Jun 07, 2009
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as below so above
as
below
so
above
a reaching carp's pout
dimples pooled smooth surface from
below; swallow in ...
flutter flight scoops her
just cut of the stream's water,
so frets the air side
— barbsdad2003, Jun 07, 2009
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Ink Dragon
17 years ago
Chuck,
barbsdad2003
17 years ago
Hey!
Ink Dragon
17 years ago
Psst, Chuck!
barbsdad2003
17 years ago
Is there such ...
Ink Dragon
17 years ago
There's Urmel,
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