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poet1
Jun 07, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Angst

The very core
so at unease
A reeling mind
cannot appease
Such longing for serenity...
internally collected
If this desire were granted
could one be so introspected?
— poet1, Jun 07, 2009
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blistered-pen

17 years ago

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I like the way you word things. it's very tight yet loose and it flows beeeaaauuutifully. really. I'm pretty sure that if we were all really happy all the time.. poetry would be different. what's weird though, is how a lot of people still associate sap with poetry when a lot of poets are really pretty.. morbid. and a teensy bit depressing. :) kudos, for short, sweet sense.
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poet1

17 years ago

Blistered-pen, love the

Blistered-pen, love the name...and your picture evokes a sense of comraderie. Thanks for your comment, most appreciated. I intend to look at your work as well. Corina
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poet1

17 years ago

Blanka, Thanks! You are so

Blanka, Thanks! You are so pretty in your picture. I am not a fan of poetry that goes on forever... (only exception- The Raven) I like it to be concise. Looking forward to reading your work as well. Corina

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