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Jun 08, 2009
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The Volcano
for many years the volcano has been asleep
then all of a sudden
it decides to wake up
with a mighty explosion
it erupts
sending out a thick cloud of ash into the sky
with in minutes, the sun disappears
turning day into night
hot molten rock
spills out from the top and begins to flow
soon a river of lava is formed
it’s path is deadly
for any thing in that gets in the way will be destroyed
this is a volcano that will show’s no mercy
— karen, Jun 08, 2009
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Arrow
17 years ago
I felt a little adrift, unsure
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