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faerybeki
faerybeki
Jun 09, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

The Right Shape

                                      I
                                   I am
                               I am just
                          the right shape
                             for the skin
                                   that
                                    I'm
                                     in
— faerybeki, Jun 09, 2009

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Atticus

17 years ago

bravo!

Clever, I love it! What else is there to say? -ns
faerybeki

faerybeki

17 years ago

Wow, thank you. :) You must

Wow, thank you. :) You must have been commenting here at the same time I was commenting on you, really loved your latest post, must read more of you. thanks again, much love b x
Seren

Seren

17 years ago

Beki this is simply Magic

Beki this is simply Magic and the shape reminds me of a cross ... so beautiful ... Like Kelsey said very clever .. Love and Light Jayne x x
faerybeki

faerybeki

17 years ago

Thanks Jayne, so pleased you

Thanks Jayne, so pleased you enjoyed :) I was kind of going for body shape but can see the cross thing definitely, man with arms outstretched perhaps, embracing? Embracing ones self even :) Thanks again for stopping by Jayne, I'm growing quite fond of your visits, much love b xx
faerybeki

faerybeki

17 years ago

Thanks Blanka, happy you

Thanks Blanka, happy you liked the poem, and really appreciate your stopping here to comment :) It can often come down to perspective can't it? How we choose to see. much love b xx
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paparazii

17 years ago

Aaaaaa--u did it again

Aaaa--u did it again, this piece of work cuts through like a magic blade, it's Yummy Beki--lovely. love u Ephy
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Wafi

17 years ago

A Sweet Little Piece

A sweet little piece Beki, holding so much within.... Creative thing! Sincerely, Wafi "Culture, location and beliefs; All vanish with love!" ~Afzal Shauq~
faerybeki

faerybeki

17 years ago

Manena Wafi, always lovely

Manena Wafi, always lovely to see you here. This was a strange little piece for me, it just popped up in it's littleness, shape and all and just kept tugging at me, never before have I had a poem nag me so much lol. Happy you enjoyed :) much love b xx
Cloudthings

Cloudthings

17 years ago

what a fantastic little write, it is perfect, just like your sha

Gorgeous Beki, what a fantastic little write, it is perfect, just like your shape, & such a fun thing... wonderful, like you! xxx~ Anni ~~~ "I feel no need for any other faith than my faith in the kindness of human beings. I am so absorbed in the wonder of earth and the life upon it that I cannot think of heaven and angels." Pearl S. Buck:
faerybeki

faerybeki

17 years ago

Ahh Keith, a most

Ahh Keith, a most appropriate reading indeed, thank you, happy you enjoyed! :) much love b xx
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Ink Dragon

17 years ago

Beki,

I adore this clever little piece. And I have always suspected that you are a diamond shaped kite that can soar on the breeze. Yours, ~Nina
faerybeki

faerybeki

17 years ago

Dear Nina, thank you! :) You

Dear Nina, thank you! :) You guys here provide the thermals I surf, your encouragement always lifts me :) Thanks again, much love b x
faerybeki

faerybeki

16 years 11 months ago

:) Happy you had fun here

:) Happy you had fun here Chuck, thanks for taking time to comment, it was good to be brought back to this one, much love Beki x

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