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sedona snow
Jun 12, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

4AM

I awoke this morning...........Alone

Remembering your warm breath

upon my neck and your arms

Holding Me throughout the cold night.

I listen to the sounds of silence

Surrounding Me in this empty room!

Feeling the overwhelming Blackness

Then Tasting the Salt of My Tears................

Sedona Snow
— sedona snow, Jun 12, 2009
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17 years ago

I feel the isolation in

I feel the isolation in these words. If you are the one experiencing this anguish, I too have felt this. I pray you are relieved of your pain and that you will find 4:00 a.m. in blissful slumber. (Unless you work nights :) Corina

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