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Unaffected

Isolation accompanies
familiar sentiment recollects
The languid thoughts again return
as optimism, it rejects
Alteration of perception
yearning, seeking a solution
Yet reality succumbs
without idyllic resolution
— poet1, Jun 12, 2009

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17 years ago

Unaffected

Isolation accompanies familiar sentiment recollects The languid thoughts again return as optimism, it rejects [break here changing a thought starting out with [REJECTING] Alteration of perception yearning, seeking a solution [break here changing a thought] Yet reality succumbs without idyllic resolution HOPE THIS IS USEFUL LOVE TO U PRESS

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