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Jun 14, 2009
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The Rivers
Let the rivers
flow far away
into the meadows
to another day.
Let the rivers
run like nerves
flow far away
to be submerged.
Let the rivers
read like tales
with stories told
of many whales.
Let the rivers
see like dogs
help the blind
through the fog.
flow far away
into the meadows
to another day.
Let the rivers
run like nerves
flow far away
to be submerged.
Let the rivers
read like tales
with stories told
of many whales.
Let the rivers
see like dogs
help the blind
through the fog.
— Fleur MacDonald, Jun 14, 2009
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Seren
16 years 12 months ago
I felt like floating away on
Fleur MacDonald
16 years 12 months ago
Thankyou Jayne,
Nordic cloud
16 years 2 months ago
Nice little story
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