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leonard daranjo
Jun 17, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Messages that defy Earth's Gravitational Pull - For Jayne


Behind a confusedand chattering mindlies an ocean of silencespace and time;behind the purplepyramid of perplexitylies the quintessenceof deep serenity;behind the illusionof sought-after happinesslies the permanenceof pure bliss;behind a mirageof a myriad peccadilloeslies a great reservoirof inexhaustible strengthbehind the dauntingdarkness of doubtflourishes a lightof eternal hope
— leonard daranjo, Jun 17, 2009
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Seren

Seren

16 years 12 months ago

I am speachless and you know

I am speachless and you know why I am.... you are such a wonderful writer .... thank you for this ... You made me cry I am so touched thank you (((((((((((((HUGZ))))))))))) you are a wonderful poet and a beautiful person dont ever change ..... This is near to perfection my friend ... Much Love and respect Jayne x x
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leonard daranjo

16 years 12 months ago

Thank you Jayne

I am really touched to have made such an impact. It was your words: OK enough sad stuff lets get on with writing wonderful poetry and living this life we are blessed with which inspired me to write this. Take care ... Leonard
Seren

Seren

16 years 12 months ago

I am home ...

and wanted to leave a message on this for you ... I am so honored that I inspired you so often the people here inspire me it gives me a sense of pride and im not going to lie and say it doesnt ... that I inspired this ... these words are so beautiful and to think you wrote them for me is a incredibly humbling experience ... thank you so much I didnt know what to say when I first read it , it was like reading a description of me , in a way the first lines are more true than you could have known , not in a bad way but its scary how transparent I must be lol ... But I am grateful for this one day my kids will have this I have saved it for them ... so from them I will thank you in advance ... Much love and respect Jayne (hugz) x x mwahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh :)
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Ink Dragon

16 years 12 months ago

Leonard,

beautifully phrased, and from my own interaction with Jayne I feel that you have caught the essence of her here. Thanks, ~Nina
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 12 months ago

Beautiful

You have captured the essence of our own dear Jayne! Always, Cat
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Taniaspoetry

16 years 12 months ago

Hi Leonard This poem’s

Hi Leonard This poem's wisdom outstrips its brevity; and is made lovelier by the dedication to Jayne. With respect to you both Tania
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leonard daranjo

16 years 11 months ago

Thank you Blanka

I am really honoured that you should think the way you do about the poem. It is indeed a great pleasure. Take care ... Leonard
Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

16 years 12 months ago

For Jayne

What a beautiful tribute Leonard. I will have to get to know Jayne, as well as some other poets here on the site better~ ______________________________________________________ Income-tax forms should be more realistic by allowing the taxpayer to list "Uncle Sam" as a dependent Anonymous
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leonard daranjo

16 years 11 months ago

Thank you Janice

You have always supported my work like a rock and been a great friend. I am really happy to have made a friend like you. Take care ... Leonard
Cloudthings

Cloudthings

16 years 12 months ago

Fabulous, a great write & it describes Jayne Chloe really well,

Fabulous, a great write & it describes Jayne Chloe really well, but also stands on it's own. Fantastic write I think you should feel proud Cheers~ Anni ~~~ "Courage, it would seem, is nothing less than the power to overcome danger, misfortune, fear, injustice, while continuing to affirm inwardly that life with all its sorrows is good; that everything is meaningful even if in a sense beyond o
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leonard daranjo

16 years 11 months ago

Thank you Anni

I do indeed feel proud - not so much because of what I have written but more because there are sensitive poets like you who could appreciate the written word. Thank you once again and take care ... Leonard
themoonman

themoonman

16 years 11 months ago

Leonard...

it is so nice to see you focus on Jayne... she is a sweetheart! and this is written with a sensitivity deeply becoming of you, my hat is off to you both... Richard
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 11 months ago

Leonard, o how you sing! So

Leonard, o how you sing! So much love in you. Anna "There are very few human beings who receive the truth, complete and staggering, by instant illumination. Most of them acquire it fragment by fragment, on a small scale, by successive developments, cellularly, like a laborious mosaic." Anais Nin

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