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Sharing the Night

A luminous glow
lights up the night
bedazzled I swoon
this midnight delight

ghosts of the timber
are grey in the dark
until the silence splits
with a victimized bark

shadows duck shade
and dance on thin air,
malcontents shudder
as feet jag a snare

beautiful cannot
describe what I see,
a garden of Eden
has been set free

the light coming down
our tide- orb above,
cast all in magic
its night-time I love

hope on a cloud
faith in the heart
never separating
or tearing us apart

I look to the moon
with space to spare,
goose bumps arrive
I needed to share

About This Poem

Last Few Words: I couldnt sleep and looked outside ... I can only say ... poetry in motion .... Thanks Eph for the suggestions ... as you can see I used them all :) lol

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - draft

About the Author

Region, Country: New South Wales, Australia, AUS

Favorite Poets: Once upon a time I would have had a plethora of poets here ... there are way to many brilliant poets to name them all ... If pushed for favourites ... Pablo Neruda, P.K.Page ...

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Comments

lou

lou

14 years ago

Jayne

love it all especially stanza 3

Lou

Candlewitch

Candlewitch

14 years ago

Dearest Jayne,

every word is perfection! I love and admire how your mind works. You weave a spell that no one else can do. Your style is all your own.

hope on a cloud
faith in the heart
never separating
or tearing us apart

I look to the moon
with space to spare,
goose bumps arrive
I needed to share

Love, Cat