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Sharing the Night
A luminous glow
lights up the night
bedazzled I swoon
this midnight delight
ghosts of the timber
are grey in the dark
until the silence splits
with a victimized bark
shadows duck shade
and dance on thin air,
malcontents shudder
as feet jag a snare
beautiful cannot
describe what I see,
a garden of Eden
has been set free
the light coming down
our tide- orb above,
cast all in magic
its night-time I love
hope on a cloud
faith in the heart
never separating
or tearing us apart
I look to the moon
with space to spare,
goose bumps arrive
I needed to share
About This Poem
Last Few Words: I couldnt sleep and looked outside ... I can only say ... poetry in motion .... Thanks Eph for the suggestions ... as you can see I used them all :) lol
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - draft
Comments
lou
14 years ago
Jayne
love it all especially stanza 3
Lou
Candlewitch
14 years ago
Dearest Jayne,
every word is perfection! I love and admire how your mind works. You weave a spell that no one else can do. Your style is all your own.
hope on a cloud
faith in the heart
never separating
or tearing us apart
I look to the moon
with space to spare,
goose bumps arrive
I needed to share
Love, Cat
Natural_Mystic
14 years ago
Enjoyed that poem it made me
Enjoyed that poem it made me feel so at ease with the world around me thank you