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Jun 20, 2009
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DEPARTING
Perfectly impermanent.....
So fragile,
These egg shells
Overly dry and brittle,
Waiting for Life's callous touch
To turn them to dust.
While I am nothing
But a weeping heart
That these shards pierce,
My blood flowing out in tears.
I have many wounds now......
Yet my heart never fails
To well over with the salted emotion,
Spilling eternally over the brim
Of an ocean blue sky.
Shall I take your fine dust
And mingle it
With the liquid azure of my sorrow,
And let the stark whiteness of your absence
Paint the shadows in my soul
A lighter color?
Now a healing poultice
For my weary spirit,
Comforting as time passes.....
Becoming the backdrop on which
Your memory will lie.
— Blue_Halcyon, Jun 20, 2009
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Critiques
Candlewitch
16 years 11 months ago
Very sad
Seren
16 years 11 months ago
Beauty and Grace in sadness
dina grey
16 years 11 months ago
Very beautiful and sad. I
Geezer
16 years 11 months ago
Healing
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