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Jun 20, 2009
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Portrait
Painting a picture
a picture of you
you and your friend
a friend of mine
you sit together
on a comfy couch
ready and waiting
two friends I like
this portrait of you
your friend of mine
with face in profile
with a wide smile
an intimate portrait
of a quiet time
between two friends
two friends of mine
I mix the paint
to paint your face
colour in the warmth
two hearts so dear
captured well
in the light this
portrait holds
two friends of mine
a picture of you
you and your friend
a friend of mine
you sit together
on a comfy couch
ready and waiting
two friends I like
this portrait of you
your friend of mine
with face in profile
with a wide smile
an intimate portrait
of a quiet time
between two friends
two friends of mine
I mix the paint
to paint your face
colour in the warmth
two hearts so dear
captured well
in the light this
portrait holds
two friends of mine
— Fleur MacDonald, Jun 20, 2009
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Critiques
weirdelf
16 years 11 months ago
Fucking superb!
Fleur MacDonald
16 years 11 months ago
aww thanks
Seren
16 years 11 months ago
What Jess said LOL ...
Cloudthings
16 years 11 months ago
Hi Fluer, I liked the
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