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silence


silences spring upfrom between words and say morethan you intend to  
— leonard daranjo, Jun 22, 2009

Critiques

themoonman

themoonman

16 years 11 months ago

Leonard...

You are very good at stating the short truths... Silence... it can hurt more than all the words that have been said if the silence is from one you crave to hear... deepened thoughts! Richard
Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

16 years 11 months ago

silence

Now this one Leonard, is brillant!! _____________________________________________________ Income-tax forms should be more realistic by allowing the taxpayer to list "Uncle Sam" as a dependent Anonymous
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leonard daranjo

16 years 11 months ago

Thank you Janice

for being there. Without the beholder, beauty would be lose its meaning. Your friend ... Leonard

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