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Jun 29, 2009
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A Salmagundi
A
Salmagundi
---
poetry? you call
this poetry? I think not;
on the other hand ...
---barbsdad
---
tell
me
sensible
is as sensible
does, I know, I know, but tell
me, please, just what is
sensible?
---
a
curding
a contrail leaves its
curding milk widening against
an azure sky; so ...
---
against
her
the world, I think, needs
a break from all the humans
who live against her
---
when
the
bus?
I confuse myself:
I've asked a'ready, I know,
but ... when's the bus due?
---
off my
patio
wild onions bloom off
my patio; I eat them
normally; not now
---
I call
a bluff
I read the sign says
Trespassers Violated;
here I wait; nothing
^
eu kaul
a pwhruf
eu raoed -t saoeupb saeus
trespafrs sraoeultd;
haoer eu waeut; tphug
— barbsdad2003, Jun 29, 2009
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Seren
16 years 11 months ago
I would never call your bluff
barbsdad2003
16 years 11 months ago
I so like your ...
Candlewitch
16 years 11 months ago
=)
barbsdad2003
16 years 11 months ago
Your favorite's ...
Janice Pearce
16 years 11 months ago
Chuck
barbsdad2003
16 years 11 months ago
Hey!
themoonman
16 years 11 months ago
Salmagundi...
barbsdad2003
16 years 11 months ago
I do like to ...
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