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leonard daranjo
Jul 02, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

dissolution of time; flowering of consciousness


time ceases when onemerges with it and becomespart of its movement  consciousness flowerswhen one becomes part of timeby merging with it
— leonard daranjo, Jul 02, 2009
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Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 11 months ago

Hello

Your haiku has got me thinking about time in its many aspects and our perception of them. Nice work. Always, Cat
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Taniaspoetry

16 years 11 months ago

the perception of time

Hi Leonard Read the other day, that time exists so that we can make sense of things as they happen and grow from our experiences. So time is not definite, but variable. But you say it much much better! Cheers Tania PS: My suggestion is to relook at three 'it/s' and see if one can be done away with

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