Join the Neopoet online poetry workshop and community to improve as a writer, meet fellow poets, and showcase your work. Sign up, submit your poetry, and get started.
Jul 05, 2009
⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)
Fucking Freedom
It was simple
- Bush surrendering.
no troops entrenched
behind the White House
sod.
No improvised
bluster bomb
reseeding receding white
man’s anachronistic
burden
He was tired
of trying for Daddy's
salutes after hitching his
wagon to Cheney’s bloated moon
beam.
He's left a solemn template
- how to dry fuck whole nations and
too sedated to know whose ass
he was lubricating with
blood
He was lost, lost, lost in the
magnitude of his brokenness, in the
suction of perverse ambition,
in colonies of swelling
corpses.
Now we are all agin' him
his "c’mon over" voodoo face
the good ol' guy who let "I want" have
the only fucking freedom he
understands
— bjp, Jul 05, 2009
Share this poem
Critiques
infinite_dwarf
16 years 11 months ago
Wow, Brian
bjp
16 years 11 months ago
Dear Jessica,
Seren
16 years 11 months ago
Dear Brian
bjp
16 years 11 months ago
Dear Jayne-Chloe,
Seren
16 years 11 months ago
Dear Brian
weirdelf
16 years 11 months ago
My highest praise is-
bjp
16 years 11 months ago
Dear Jess,
Ink Dragon
16 years 11 months ago
Brian,
bjp
16 years 11 months ago
Dear Nina,
weirdelf
16 years 11 months ago
keep the title
themoonman
16 years 11 months ago
Yes Brian...
bjp
16 years 11 months ago
Dear Richard,
themoonman
16 years 11 months ago
Brian...
Kailashana
16 years 11 months ago
The scary thing is that we
bjp
16 years 11 months ago
Dear Anna,
Kailashana
16 years 11 months ago
Who, moi? One of my
Rett
16 years 11 months ago
Brian, you ain't seen nothing yet
bjp
16 years 11 months ago
Dear Rett,
Kailashana
16 years 11 months ago
My my, we are ENTRENCHED in
infinite_dwarf
16 years 11 months ago
Congrats, Brian
bjp
16 years 11 months ago
Dear Jessica,
infinite_dwarf
16 years 11 months ago
*smiles* thank you
Kailashana
16 years 11 months ago
Lol. Mea Culpa #2
Fleur MacDonald
16 years 11 months ago
Let me just say
bjp
16 years 11 months ago
Dear fleur,
Candlewitch
16 years 11 months ago
Amen! (for lack of a better word)
bjp
16 years 11 months ago
Dear Cat,
Candlewitch
16 years 11 months ago
My Real Name Is
Eduardo Cruz
16 years 11 months ago
Finally some one with sense!!
bjp
16 years 11 months ago
Dear Eduardo,
Eduardo Cruz
16 years 11 months ago
Brian,
Bonitaj
16 years 11 months ago
Do I DARE
bjp
16 years 11 months ago
Dear Bonita j,
Ink Dragon
16 years 11 months ago
Boni!!!!!!!!!!
Beslynn
16 years 11 months ago
Dear Brian, Just wanted to
bjp
16 years 11 months ago
Dear Beslynn,
Godweed
16 years 11 months ago
absolutey amazing
bjp
16 years 11 months ago
Dear Godweed,
seabhac
16 years 11 months ago
Wow , don’t change the
bjp
16 years 11 months ago
Dear seabhac,
ucon27
16 years 4 months ago
I Loved This
bjp
16 years 4 months ago
Dear Wayne,
Kailashana
16 years 4 months ago
poor George he far from his
Join Neopoet to leave a critique
Neopoet is a free community of poets who critique and support each other's writing.