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Have you ever love

Have you ever love, doubtless

That you could believe all is clear

And fully provided to the brim

 

Have you ever love, that the world

Seemed everlastingly heaven

With all salvation and glory

 

Have you ever love, above everything

The rose that was in your hand could

Feel like nothing else, but eternally new

 

Have you ever love, with all your natural

Privileges, love to love, the mankind confusion

All these precious pleasures you felt

In abundance, given

 

Have you ever love, that nothing was left

Of you to do, but live each day and night

Rejoicing expecting this to eternity

 

Have you ever love, latter

To realise that, you’ve loved falsely?

 

 

— paparazii, Jul 11, 2009

Critiques

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chappell

16 years 11 months ago

Have you ever love

Enjoyed this poem. I read your profile and it was very moving. Continue to share your gift with others. GOD's love is adequate also, eternal. Stay blessed!
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paparazii

16 years 11 months ago

Chappel

Thanks buddy, it's all out of experience, when we're moved with what we've experienced, we're left longing for something different or the need to go back and review what we missed. Stay blessed too. Pleasant days and good nights

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