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Jul 12, 2009
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Jetstream
I like a smooth
writing pen
a fine tip
one called Jetstream
has taken
my fancy
of late
made by that
japanese mob
mitsubishi
it can fly across
the page
without a glitch
smooth and
effortless
no little dribbles
which you have
to wipe off
especially love
the retractable
Jetstream
they come in
blue
black and red
not to heavy
and
not to light
writing pen
a fine tip
one called Jetstream
has taken
my fancy
of late
made by that
japanese mob
mitsubishi
it can fly across
the page
without a glitch
smooth and
effortless
no little dribbles
which you have
to wipe off
especially love
the retractable
Jetstream
they come in
blue
black and red
not to heavy
and
not to light
— Fleur MacDonald, Jul 12, 2009
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Ink Dragon
16 years 11 months ago
Fleur,
Esker
16 years ago
all my pens leave me for
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