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The forest king

The Forest King
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The forest beckons me
With it's intangible woody silence,
To dark places I go
Immersed in shadow
and leafy fold
Where sun trickles intermittently
Through a canopy
Bejeweled with morning dew,
Dazzling arrays of dancing beams,
Within secret halls
I sit alone---regal
A stump for a throne

 

— mugsy, Jul 13, 2009

Critiques

Ravenshakti

Ravenshakti

16 years 11 months ago

The Forest King... Alive...

Your words weave brightly, an image of the Forest King... so dear to my heart... An enchantment of the Woods. I dearly appreciate your Poem. Raven
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mugsy

16 years 11 months ago

the forest king

"Thank you very much Raven, your kind words are an inspiration."

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