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Jul 14, 2009
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an ordinary morning
==
an
ordinary
morning
::
at morning's
bright'ning light,
I strain with
all my might;
but these damn socks,
they're on too tight
---barbsdad
::
a songbird trills; a
uniformed man at the edge
of his garage fills
a dark-red gas can
with a hose; a wild rabbit
steals wraithlike across
the roadway; a bi-
cyclist pedals past;
a low-powered
motorcycle whines
at near distance; the moon gleams
white, full; a turtledove
hunches on a wire
overhead against the cool;
yet barely postdawn,
I walk
==
— barbsdad2003, Jul 14, 2009
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Ink Dragon
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Chuck,
barbsdad2003
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Thank you ...
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