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Jul 16, 2009
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Lunden: "Oh, no!"
==
Lunden:
"Oh, no!"
::
[she knows] how to live,
calmly, reticently yet gaily,
and sometimes with abandon
---A. Bennett
::
I drop my plastic
drinking cup to ground
and
watch its water stain
the dust.
"Oh, no!" she says to
no one in
particular.
I trip across my
feet, then
recover.
Hand cupped over her
mouth in concerned
alarm,
she blurts, "Oh, no!" to
the morning air.
I drop her an un-
expected
compliment.
"Oh, no!" she cries with-
out a prior thought.
Which brings, of course, to
my sure lips a smile;
and
now I'm left to plan
my very next
surprise.
---
Author's note: Lunden
is not yet two years old.
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— barbsdad2003, Jul 16, 2009
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Candlewitch
16 years 11 months ago
"Oh No"
Ink Dragon
16 years 11 months ago
Chuck,
faerybeki
16 years 11 months ago
Yes Chuck, I know this SO
Janice Pearce
16 years 10 months ago
Lunden
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